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Title: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 01, 2020, 03:03:37 am
Let's have fun with this Shonda !!!
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 01, 2020, 01:45:45 pm
I let you start this one off how ever want start it off Mark I am sure we will have fun doing this something new to me but seems like it will be fun sense it's your forum you name the title of the song as well ...
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 01, 2020, 02:35:43 pm
I  have so many possible songs in my head and I do best when I'm not even trying - words and beats and rhythms come to me instantly and my only problem is remembering them !!! Maybe typing stiff here will help - feel free to create because these are all time stamped with the date and nobody can steal our content and make billions.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 02, 2020, 02:38:02 pm
I give it a try I made this small song up you can take it and add to it if you like the choice is up to you :)I try my best too you know who knows what this may bring out on songs nothing wrong let's be strong
I might even put this song on a cartoon cause I been singing this song the way I would sing it...


Being a Friend til the end

"Don't be a Foe  Be a friend may never know how you could be friends til the end." You can help each other by being there just let each other know  you both Really care.You Know I am an email from you anytime you need a friend you can call me too! I am so glad we can get along I Thank God for our Hearts to be strong. You Lift me up when I was put to the ground I'm so glad we're getting around. I am so happy to be your friend I Thank God that we are friends til the end.


Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 02, 2020, 03:48:57 pm
I'm sleeping on it - see what we come up with, this is good.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 07, 2020, 01:01:08 am

I am going to try on this one..

Believe in yourself


You got to believe in yourself no one is not going to do it for you... You have to reach out and touch someones heart believe in yourself... you can do anything you put your mind into at least you are believing yourself ... You got to believe reach out for the sky You got to believe in yourself that's why Ohhhh you got to believe Ohhhh you got to believe just like in reality in many ways it's so good to be me I am glad I believe now there right here waiting for me to believe in myself this this is why you have believe in yourself cause others are waiting for you to believe in yourself.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 07, 2020, 03:14:02 am

I am going to try on this one..

Believe in yourself


You got to believe in yourself no one is not going to do it for you... You have to reach out and touch someones heart believe in yourself... you can do anything you put your mind into at least you are believing yourself ... You got to believe reach out for the sky You got to believe in yourself that's why Ohhhh you got to believe Ohhhh you got to believe just like in reality in many ways it's so good to be me I am glad I believe now there right here waiting for me to believe in myself this this is why you have believe in yourself cause others are waiting for you to believe in yourself.
OK cool - I would change it like this:

You got to believe in yourself, no one will do it for you . . You have top reach out and touch someone's heart, believe in yourself . . You can do anything you put your mind to, believe in yourself.

You got to believe - reach for the sky. . . you got to believe in yourself that's the reason why. . . Ohhhh you got to believe you got to believe - like in reality in so many ways it's good to be me. . . I am glad I believe now, they're right there waiting. . . for me to believe !!!


Should we add more? What do you think of my changes? It's OK to disagree and we need to be frank to do good songs.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 07, 2020, 03:41:51 am
Man I just love the way you did this ...
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 08, 2020, 06:36:06 pm

I am going to try on this one..

Believe in yourself


You got to believe in yourself no one is not going to do it for you... You have to reach out and touch someones heart believe in yourself... you can do anything you put your mind into at least you are believing yourself ... You got to believe reach out for the sky You got to believe in yourself that's why Ohhhh you got to believe Ohhhh you got to believe just like in reality in many ways it's so good to be me I am glad I believe now there right here waiting for me to believe in myself this this is why you have believe in yourself cause others are waiting for you to believe in yourself.
OK cool - I would change it like this:

You got to believe in yourself, no one will do it for you . . You have top reach out and touch someone's heart, believe in yourself . . You can do anything you put your mind to, believe in yourself.

You got to believe - reach for the sky. . . you got to believe in yourself that's the reason why. . . Ohhhh you got to believe you got to believe - like in reality in so many ways it's good to be me. . . I am glad I believe now, they're right there waiting. . . for me to believe !!!


Should we add more? What do you think of my changes? It's OK to disagree and we need to be frank to do good songs.
You got to believe in yourself, no one will do it for you . . You have top reach out and touch someone's heart, believe in yourself . . You can do anything you put your mind to, believe in yourself.

You got to believe - reach for the sky. . . you got to believe in yourself that's the reason why. . . Ohhhh you got to believe you got to believe - like in reality in so many ways it's good to be me. . . I am glad I believe now, they're right there waiting. . . for me to believe !!!


OK let's see what more we can do here -


Believe in yourself if you want to succeed, love is a garden so plant the seed . . .
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 08, 2020, 11:00:57 pm
wow that is nice really like this you really know your way with words.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 11, 2020, 08:00:36 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 11, 2020, 08:44:20 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
That is good there  really like this would not change one bit of it on that..wow with meanings and feelings you ought to do this more often express your way with words like you are now...


Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 12, 2020, 11:52:13 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies

I go back to places I knew to see myself and reflect . . . Life is a blink of an eye and we never know the truth

Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 14, 2020, 05:14:42 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies

I go back to places I knew to see myself and reflect . . . Life is a blink of an eye and we never know the truth
I Like this one you have talent in you with words hope you keep using those words out like this  :)Thank you.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 22, 2020, 10:08:32 am
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies

I go back to places I knew to see myself and reflect . . . Life is a blink of an eye and we never know the truth
But what did I expect?
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on July 22, 2020, 06:01:41 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies

I go back to places I knew to see myself and reflect . . . Life is a blink of an eye and we never know the truth
But what did I expect?
cause only God knows the truth even know it may hurt us people will hear our cries.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 22, 2020, 08:31:52 pm
I have lots of words and groups of words, ideas and themes like meanings and feelings. I have never tried to write them or type them out.


We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies


See I just came up with that in the moment, never planned it - but we can do more and make it better Shonda
We find out what this world is about long after we should . . . The magic and wonder destroyed by lies
The only hope we have is in Jesus Christ . . . His magic and wonder never dies

I go back to places I knew to see myself and reflect . . . Life is a blink of an eye and we never know the truth
But what did I expect?
cause only God knows the truth even know it may hurt us people will hear our cries.
We pray to God for answers - we cry out from within
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on July 28, 2020, 03:24:46 am
New Song -

She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know -  :o
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 01, 2020, 01:34:48 am
Oh I love this great work on this Mark... lovely song
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 01, 2020, 12:54:34 pm
New Song -

She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know -  :o
She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know


that special day will come 
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on August 24, 2020, 10:57:50 am
New Song -

She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know -  :o
She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know


that special day will come
You amaze me - you know, I have trouble coming up with cool sounding words and stuff that create images in the minds of the listener. Plus I don't play any instruments do you Shonda?
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 24, 2020, 03:26:38 pm
New Song -

She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know -  :o
She says she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars

I thought she'd be there holding daisies . . She always waits for me

She says we might get married, you just never know


that special day will come
You amaze me - you know, I have trouble coming up with cool sounding words and stuff that create images in the minds of the listener. Plus I don't play any instruments do you Shonda?
I do have a music maker and it can create it's own song and I can use  drums and base and a guitar on there along with piano and create my own sounds as well along with my own voice sounding I can make my own voice sound like a piano and other sounds when talking or singing on it lol it's all in the fun of the program on my computer yes i do play instruments with the program by the touch of my mouse lol got over 100's and 100's of music filters to use on my program on the pc with music maker it's got all kinds of sounds to play with on it ... old style piano or church organs base on it and it's got it's pads on there where I pick a song setting and tap on a number or letter it plays the sound of the beat it can play bell sounds as well got so many sounds on it Mark I can not keep up with the count on it ...got for christmas last year ...it's good program to use really enjoy it as well... I play instruments on my music maker on computer hope that is good to use on here...  :)
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 26, 2020, 05:49:53 am
Don't Give Up!
"Don't give up now  Don't give up! Don't give up
 something that you love to do why would you
throw something away that comes from your heart why don't
 you try something new
give the new thing a try and you will see but don't give up now,
don't give up don't give now and we want you to stay strong.


Always remember
why you started this in the first place and
you want to throw all your hard work
away.When you worked so hard Now you can
 put a smile on your face
cause you have people that care and love you
for what you do  don't give up don't give up
now cause we want you to believe in yourself
 don't give up don't give up on what you have
now be happy on where you are at just  remember
 we are here to learn and have fun and get to know
 each other this is why we don't give up now don't give up now
don't give up  cause we are here together for you.
Don't give up now Don't give up Don't give up
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 29, 2020, 10:16:07 pm
You amaze me - you know, I have trouble coming up with cool sounding words and stuff that create images in the minds of the listener. Plus I don't play any instruments do you Shonda?
In order to make a song music comes out first you know how you make words up with the sound of music on how it sounds and say the words to go along with the music... I don't know if that is easier for you or others or not but it is easier for me just now thinking of it cause when i do listen to other music I put my own words into it as well for fun... hope that helps out...
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on August 30, 2020, 09:36:58 am
I wanna see my baby but we never met yet. When will I see her and hold her?

Well, get ready get set.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 30, 2020, 11:44:07 pm
I wanna see my baby but we never met yet. When will I see her and hold her?

Well, get ready get set.
Bring my baby to me, so I can see her and tell her how I feel.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 31, 2020, 08:46:49 am
I wanna see my baby but we never met yet. When will I see her and hold her?

Well, get ready get set.
Bring my baby to me, so I can see her and tell her how I feel.
She called me up and said to me " I know we have not met yet, but you are in on my mind and you are already with me and my heart is pounding right next yours I just hope you can feel it."
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: La Shonda on August 31, 2020, 09:01:38 am
I wanna see my baby but we never met yet. When will I see her and hold her?

Well, get ready get set.
Bring my baby to me, so I can see her and tell her how I feel.
She called me up and said to me " I know we have not met yet, but you are in on my mind and you are already with me and my heart is pounding right next yours I just hope you can feel it."
She is telling me we will meet on this special day when the right time comes. When you walk out of the darkness and I will be standing in the brightness.
Title: Re: Mark & La Shonda Songwriting
Post by: patrick jane on August 31, 2020, 12:24:41 pm
I wanna see my baby but we never met yet. When will I see her and hold her?

Well, get ready get set.
Bring my baby to me, so I can see her and tell her how I feel.
She called me up and said to me " I know we have not met yet, but you are in on my mind and you are already with me and my heart is pounding right next yours I just hope you can feel it."
She is telling me we will meet on this special day when the right time comes. When you walk out of the darkness and I will be standing in the brightness.
I wish I could give more than one rating for this - I would choose a Heart, a Winner, a Thumbs Up

Shonda, I really feel this will happen someday. I want it to but I can be content being alone until I die. We enter this world naked and on our own except for doctors, nurses and parents, but we have to start BREATHING and Living. When we die we are alone again to take that journey. I am content and joyful but I could be even more so with you.