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The Story
« on: February 23, 2021, 03:50:00 am »
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« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2021, 06:45:56 pm »
What is this?

Do you want to tell a story?

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« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2021, 06:53:34 pm »
I think the old written as a play or as a series of emails or letters are a niche needing explored.  Maybe one of those would work.  I always wanted to do one as a series of reports being sent in from a reporter in the field.  You get to be narrative but state it as a first hand observer. 
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« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2021, 06:54:31 pm »
I would like collaboration from the forum members on this site including ideas, thoughts and lines in the book/script. I am concerned about people stealing the story or the ideas but I don't want to use Microsoft or Wordpress. I need a place to "write" and edit as I go etc.


Anyone could read this thread and steal the story so I'm not sure where to write it.

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« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2021, 07:41:41 pm »
I have a Laptop I use that has no internet ability.  I loaded word from a disc.    Thats how I write my full text.

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« Reply #5 on: February 24, 2021, 02:21:18 pm »
pj, how much writing have you done?  Are you an architect or a gardener when it comes to writing?  How long do you want the work?

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« Reply #6 on: February 24, 2021, 10:39:47 pm »
pj, how much writing have you done?  Are you an architect or a gardener when it comes to writing?  How long do you want the work?
Well I got an A in college in writing but I wasn't really trying lol. I do the outline in my head and give a lot of thought to a story before I even begin to type or write.


To tell you how long it's been I am used to writing in cursive by hand. My mind flows better that way but it's been a long time. There are so many places I could start the story or the opening scene.
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« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2021, 08:34:38 pm »
While I am different I like to do the character's backstories   This helps me keep the characters on point so the story line stays focused.    It also helps if there is a sequel I know where I started and where they are at.
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« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2021, 08:54:41 pm »
Chappy-- I do like that Orwell story too.  I read it in high school (as required reading at that time) in 1981 and was astonished to learn it had been written in 1949.  Even then I knew this was no ordinary story, but a vision of things to come.

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« Reply #11 on: March 11, 2021, 12:21:58 pm »
I know some of those pics are of siblings.... but not the Yale Law Prof....  Not the school teacher....

must be coincidences.
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« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2021, 08:52:47 pm »
I know some of those pics are of siblings.... but not the Yale Law Prof....  Not the school teacher....

must be coincidences.

personally, I believe they were sacrificed to make NASA more credible.
Unfortunately, I believe Gov. from what I have seen these last 70+ years is not beyond doing something like that to get their point across. In fact, some (most) of the politicians today would sellout their own mother if it would get them more power.

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